Brigandine Grand Edition... Translation!

[tamanjiri]

i've been playing Brigandine GE with this translation in a PS1 emulator and encountered some typos (not quite sure what term to use but since it is related to texts, i used the word typo).

Brigandine Grand Edition Battle Typo 1 (Vaynard & Coel Battle)
i believe the word "ambitious" is the proper fit in the sentence in the image below rather than "ambitions".

Brigandine Grand Edition Quest Typo 1 (Dillard Quest)
Doesn't have a space between "Dillard" and "readies".

Brigandine Grand Edition Quest Typo 2 (Palomides Quest)
Doesn't have a space between "Palomides" and "decides".

Brigandine Grand Edition Quest Typo 3 (Zerafin Quest)
I guess the sentence in the image below should have the word "became/was" in-between the words "I" and "tired".

Brigandine Grand Edition Quest Typo 4 (Hyude Quest)
Since Limlit is referring to Hyude, shouldn't be the word "him" be suitable rather than "it" in that particular sentence?

i am not an expert when it comes to english grammar (english isn't my first language) but i think those that i've mentioned above need to be corrected. if ever i am mistaken, kindly inform me. thanks for hearing me out.

and lastly, sorry about the long post.